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Curtis O. Seebeck
02-15-2006, 1:51 AM
Here is a spalted pecan vase I made a while back. I had problems with it and it did not end up as tall as I wanted. I had to take some off the bottom and thus ended up with a base that is too large I think. Also, the top looks too big to me. What do you think. Honest replies only! The wood is georgeous but I am not real happy with the form. Please tear it apart!!

It measures 6 1/2" tall and is 4 1/2" in diameter.

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a340/MesquiteMan/pecan7.jpg

Bob Noles
02-15-2006, 6:45 AM
Sorry Curtis.... I see nothing not to like about that one.

If you want me to whine.... you neet to post something butt ugly :D :eek:

doug webb
02-15-2006, 6:52 AM
I think I need a closer look. Please send it to me for further evaluation. Thanks for sharing, love spalted wood. doug

Glenn Clabo
02-15-2006, 7:35 AM
Nice work Curtis. I like the "classic" form and way the grain follows it.

Jim Dunn
02-15-2006, 7:45 AM
Curtis, why are you not happy with this forum?? Did we do so say, Oh WAIT:o:o It's a very nice piece. I do like the form.

John Hart
02-15-2006, 8:00 AM
Curtis...I think it looks great overall and agree to some extent that it might add some gracefulness if the bottom was maybe half the diameter than what you have there. However, I think the top works very well. The wood is wonderful. It is a very pleasing piece for sure!:)

Keith Burns
02-15-2006, 8:06 AM
I think the top is fine but I have to agree with John on the base, needs to be smaller. Just my nickels worth.:)

valerie williams
02-15-2006, 8:08 AM
I like it, I dont know anything about form, but if I saw it in a store, I would buy it! I am a crocheter(we call ourselves happy hookers;) ) and when I see something for sale that is yarn made, I just try to copy it. Hopefully soon I will find myselfe takeing pics of wood stuff I see and duplicateing it to.

Tom Jones III
02-15-2006, 8:51 AM
Although the base might be larger than you intended, it seems to work becaue the top and base are roughly the same size. Possibly if you turned the top just a hair smaller to match the base it would look even better. At any rate it looks great.

Rich Stewart
02-15-2006, 8:57 AM
Happy Hookers. Hahah. I love it. I like the vase very much. Love the wood. Great job.

John Miliunas
02-15-2006, 9:10 AM
Curtis, I'm no high-end critic but, I think the form is fine and, of course, that wood is killer! :) Looks great.

Val, I'm afraid someone beat you to the nickname; Many moons ago, I remember seeing one of those real, real BIG tow trucks used for pulling other big trucks. All tricked out with custom paint, huge twin stacks and loads 'o chrome. Yeah, you guessed it: It was named, "The Happy Hooker"!:D Still, a "unique" name for a bunch 'o female types doing crochet! :D :cool:

Andy Hoyt
02-15-2006, 9:44 AM
I like it; and am reminded of an old amphora.

If anything the neck could be a skosh shorter and the base an equal measure of narrower. But I'm probably quiblling over trifles.

Nice effort.

Glenn Hodges
02-15-2006, 9:44 AM
Curtis, you can find some beautiful wood when you work with pecan as you have done here. I like this form. The only thing I would change would be to make the foot smaller.

Charles Hans
02-15-2006, 10:13 AM
Curtis I can't add anything more than what has ben said already, I really like the form and the wood is great! If you need to find it a good home I know just the place.

Cecil Arnold
02-15-2006, 10:45 AM
Curtis, how about this for equivocation, I think that to sit on a table the foot could be smaller, however if you wanted to put some dried flowers in it the foot is what is needed for stability(form follows function). I like it and the wood makes me want to go into the woods and cut a pecan tree, but I think I've found a bodark, and maybe a pecan that will be coming down in the next few months so the forests are safe for a while.

Dick Parr
02-15-2006, 10:49 AM
Very very nice Curtis. The only thing I might change on the next one would be a smaller base to make it look lighter. But as the others have said, this one is a keeper.;)

Glenn Clabo
02-15-2006, 10:58 AM
amphora.


That's the word I couldn't think of...all I could come up with is a greek pot...so I used classic. Some of us have more brain cells left it seems.

Cecil Arnold
02-15-2006, 11:17 AM
Glenn, are you saying you've been at the torpedo juice or something?:D

Glenn Clabo
02-15-2006, 6:42 PM
Showing your age Cecil...The stuff we use know will...aahhh...what was I saying?